3 Roles

3 ROLES

I know that it may be hard to believe, but I am a mother. I am mentally and physically a mother. Considering my child is not here yet some people may only see me as half a mom. The baby may not be here in my arms, but I still do everything[UCHS1] I can for him. I try to think about what's best for him. Not only am I a mother I am also a friend and big sister[UCHS2]

I am always there for my friends.
I treat as if they were my own flesh and blood.
I would never leave a sister or a brother behind or alone.
My friends are my family.
We stick together.
Not only am I a friend I am also a big sister[UCHS3] .

Being a big sister is not easy. It's hard to keep up with two teenage girls. They think they know everything. They drive me insane. Despite the fact that my sisters' are idiots, I still love them very much. It's my job to watch out for them. I know they may not listen, but I still have to talk. I guess you can say my big sister job has it's own rewards or at least eventually it will[UCHS4] .

In the future I would like to play the role of a wife. I have always dreamt of falling in love and marrying someone who won't screw[UCHS5] me over. Sometimes I am in doubt about even getting married. The race of married people in my family is extinct or at least cursed. I fear the same might happen to me. Then I realized that I can not focus on what my mother or grandmother or great-great mother did. I just have to hope that I choose the right person[UCHS6] that I'm supposedly suppose to spend my life with. You never know what will happen especially in marriage until you try. So I'm taking all the risks.


Porsche Stewart
Period:A3
9-13-07
Communications


[UCHS1]This is supposed to be a story. So why don’t you tell us something that you have done.

[UCHS2]You should now have body paragraph about being a mother.

[UCHS3]This paragraph is entirely opinion. I need some examples.

[UCHS4]How do they drive you insane? What do they know? What are the rewards?

[UCHS5]This language doesn’t fit the tone of the rest of the essay.

[UCHS6]How is this connected to the rest of your roles?